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Citroen City car Rendering

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Tryed to make the rear of the car, hope you like it and please leave a comment so i can improve my skills:)
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So, I`ll leave a comment because i was 14 not too much time ago ;)

The overall sketchwork looks quite good; we can see that you really have an idea of where to use light and where to use shadow. I also notice you really tried to show only the most neccessary parts of the car`s design, what is very important if you want to show quick ideas.

The first thing that immediatly seems a bit overdone is the background here. You really tried to make the background fit to the car / show sth interesting there. Imo, its a bit too much now. It distracts from the car`s design. So, e.g. just try to show the lightning in the background (from top to bottom etc.), or show one simple shape. It`ll be enough! :)

Next problem: the different surfaces; your car has a really interesting greenhouse and there are a lot of glass pieces. It is important to mention the different surface there for better understanding. So, on glass surface you should show use hard reflections with about 70% opacity. It looks also very nice if you just show some of the shapes from the interior (just look at my mercedes sketch).

I really like your use of different colours here. It is important to use a range of different tones to make it look interesting. There I see it wold be better if you would use softer edges for your dodge tool; take about 2,5 pxs.

The backlight looks very aggressive and i like the red circle in it ( seems like an eye for me!)

To make to sketch even more interesting, you could sketch some more details. So, for example an exhaust, a number plate or more shapes in the diffusor ;)

The design itself looks very aggressive with its hard shapes (perhaps you could show us some soft ones,too ;) ), and it fits to a modern SUV.

And I really have to say, the perspective is very well done. There are nearly no mistakes.

So, nice sketch and I hope all these tips are helpful for you! (If you don`t know how to use the tips, just have a look at my sketches; perhaps they`ll help you!)

Keep on sketching ;) !