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Tryed to make the rear of the car, hope you like it and please leave a comment so i can improve my skills
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So, I`ll leave a comment because i was 14 not too much time ago
The overall sketchwork looks quite good; we can see that you really have an idea of where to use light and where to use shadow. I also notice you really tried to show only the most neccessary parts of the car`s design, what is very important if you want to show quick ideas.
The first thing that immediatly seems a bit overdone is the background here. You really tried to make the background fit to the car / show sth interesting there. Imo, its a bit too much now. It distracts from the car`s design. So, e.g. just try to show the lightning in the background (from top to bottom etc.), or show one simple shape. It`ll be enough!
Next problem: the different surfaces; your car has a really interesting greenhouse and there are a lot of glass pieces. It is important to mention the different surface there for better understanding. So, on glass surface you should show use hard reflections with about 70% opacity. It looks also very nice if you just show some of the shapes from the interior (just look at my mercedes sketch).
I really like your use of different colours here. It is important to use a range of different tones to make it look interesting. There I see it wold be better if you would use softer edges for your dodge tool; take about 2,5 pxs.
The backlight looks very aggressive and i like the red circle in it ( seems like an eye for me!)
To make to sketch even more interesting, you could sketch some more details. So, for example an exhaust, a number plate or more shapes in the diffusor
The design itself looks very aggressive with its hard shapes (perhaps you could show us some soft ones,too ), and it fits to a modern SUV.
And I really have to say, the perspective is very well done. There are nearly no mistakes.
So, nice sketch and I hope all these tips are helpful for you! (If you don`t know how to use the tips, just have a look at my sketches; perhaps they`ll help you!)
Keep on sketching !
The overall sketchwork looks quite good; we can see that you really have an idea of where to use light and where to use shadow. I also notice you really tried to show only the most neccessary parts of the car`s design, what is very important if you want to show quick ideas.
The first thing that immediatly seems a bit overdone is the background here. You really tried to make the background fit to the car / show sth interesting there. Imo, its a bit too much now. It distracts from the car`s design. So, e.g. just try to show the lightning in the background (from top to bottom etc.), or show one simple shape. It`ll be enough!
Next problem: the different surfaces; your car has a really interesting greenhouse and there are a lot of glass pieces. It is important to mention the different surface there for better understanding. So, on glass surface you should show use hard reflections with about 70% opacity. It looks also very nice if you just show some of the shapes from the interior (just look at my mercedes sketch).
I really like your use of different colours here. It is important to use a range of different tones to make it look interesting. There I see it wold be better if you would use softer edges for your dodge tool; take about 2,5 pxs.
The backlight looks very aggressive and i like the red circle in it ( seems like an eye for me!)
To make to sketch even more interesting, you could sketch some more details. So, for example an exhaust, a number plate or more shapes in the diffusor
The design itself looks very aggressive with its hard shapes (perhaps you could show us some soft ones,too ), and it fits to a modern SUV.
And I really have to say, the perspective is very well done. There are nearly no mistakes.
So, nice sketch and I hope all these tips are helpful for you! (If you don`t know how to use the tips, just have a look at my sketches; perhaps they`ll help you!)
Keep on sketching !